I'm not at all sure what this poem is about, and I don't really need to know. 'Tramontane' means many things, and could be a place, the north wind, or a foreigner/drifter - ready to leave again - perhaps with Liana? I just don't know. But then, you give us one of the most amazing images of a woman's breasts I have ever encountered, comparing them to whirlpools or chariots for the gods because of their shape. It's just great!
I am very pleased that you are enjoying my poems. Many of them can have different interpretations, depending on the reader. I like yours. Thanks for reading and the thoughtful comment.
I'm not at all sure what this poem is about, and I don't really need to know. 'Tramontane' means many things, and could be a place, the north wind, or a foreigner/drifter - ready to leave again - perhaps with Liana? I just don't know. But then, you give us one of the most amazing images of a woman's breasts I have ever encountered, comparing them to whirlpools or chariots for the gods because of their shape. It's just great!
I am very pleased that you are enjoying my poems. Many of them can have different interpretations, depending on the reader. I like yours. Thanks for reading and the thoughtful comment.